Yes. Colour choices are working pretty well together, though I can't help but wonder if the Beast one would do better with a coloured background. Also - the text in the Beast one is giving me a vaguely Dozerian vibe, heh heh. One thing about that text, though: You coloured the word "man" a darker colour, so when I read it in my head, I hear it like "Gaston is a dead MAN." I think it would make more sense to emphasize the "DEAD" (either by making the word "dead" larger, or a different font, or darker, or any combination of those, than the other words), because that's where I would put my emphasis if I was to say those words. Gaston is a DEAD man. Maybe that's just me, though.
I love your brain. That is an excellent suggestion that my inebriated brain didn't consider at the time. I'll change it for sure. WE SHOULD JAM SOMETIME SOON. LETS GET THE ART GOING AGAIN.
Yes. Colour choices are working pretty well together, though I can't help but wonder if the Beast one would do better with a coloured background. Also - the text in the Beast one is giving me a vaguely Dozerian vibe, heh heh. One thing about that text, though: You coloured the word "man" a darker colour, so when I read it in my head, I hear it like "Gaston is a dead MAN." I think it would make more sense to emphasize the "DEAD" (either by making the word "dead" larger, or a different font, or darker, or any combination of those, than the other words), because that's where I would put my emphasis if I was to say those words. Gaston is a DEAD man. Maybe that's just me, though.
ReplyDeleteWhat-I-am-thinking-in-my-head-right-now: "he's back! he's back! wheee"
I love your brain. That is an excellent suggestion that my inebriated brain didn't consider at the time. I'll change it for sure. WE SHOULD JAM SOMETIME SOON. LETS GET THE ART GOING AGAIN.
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